Wednesday, 2 April 2014

Making choices

W.A.L.T: Use linking sentences to join our paragraphs. 
W.A.L.T: be specific. 

Decisions - we all have to make them but some times they aren't to easy. Some of the influences are friends,family,media,and the law. These influences help make our decisions.  

One of the influences on our decisions can be our friends. Most of the time we want to be like our friends so it influences our decisions. That is also called peer pressure. Peer pressure is when your friends pressure you into something it can be good or bad influence. On top of this influence there is your family. 

Your family is a big influence in your life. When you what to go something they might say no because they have to work. But  most of the time they just want to protect you. Some of the they are the most annoying people in the world. But they are always there for you even if you do something wrong like brake the law. 

The law is also a big influence. Some of the time the law makes the choice for you. For example, when you want to go to the mall your mum and dad might be busy. The law has all ready made your decision  because you can't drive because you are under age. So that is how the law is a big influence on your life. But you will still want to go because of the media. 

The media can be a massive influence. Because it makes every thing look awesome even when it isn't. Media is a success because it convinces everyone that what ever they say is the best so you will want to buy it. That is why I think that media is a big influence in everyone's life. 

All of these influence I think have had at least one influence in your life. That is why you should think of all of these influence next time you make a desison even if it as small as chosing an  ice-cream flavour or as big as chosing what City to move to. I think you should think of all of all of these influence next time you make a desison. But remember the choice is up to you. 

My next step is: to link my paragraphs with out some help. 

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