Friday, 19 September 2014

My writing

W.A.L.T: write a agreement with detail.


People say family is the most important thing in the world. Well then why do we spend more time at school with people that we may not know, like or that aren't even related to use at all.

I know how we can solve this! You see if you finish school at  2:00 pm then we have 1:00 more hour to do homework then we have time for our family.But if we don't this is what most people do after school is, get home, eat afternoon tea, do our homework, watch our favourite TV shows and then go to  to bed. So no time for family.

Also fitness is dropping all over the world and kids are getting over weight. I think this is because school is so long, by the end of the day kids are too tired for some fitness. Plus eat around 2:00 pm lots of kids are itching to go outside so they don't focus on there learning.

So that means no one wins because teachers have to teach us it again and us kids have basically just sat around doing nothing. Also by 3:00 pm kids have sat around so much that they are too last to go outside any more.

This is how I think school should go: In the first block 1 topic and fitness, in the second block 1 new topic and in the last block fitness to 2:00 pm then go home to do homework and play with our family.
 If you didn't know the reason you only have 2 topics a day is because, if you have like 20 different  things you won't remember any thing but if you learn 2-3 topics you can remember more.

Overall, I think a school day should be  shorter  because kids are getting over weight and hardly ever see their family and school is one of the problems.

The solo level I have reached for surface features is Multistructural because I didn't really know what they did.

The solo level I have reached is relational because I haven't proven a lot of facts.      

My next step is: to have more facts and prove where I found the facts.

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